Amazing write hun...so beauitful...thank you so much hun...i love yooouuu forever beautiful beautiful work...thank you so much...you're so amazing <3 xxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Logan, that's amazing....it really is. I love it. She's really lucky.
xoxZoexox

u are the master of all poems! If only I could just write like you I would be great...you write soo much better than me.
She is very lucky....

**jazz**

That was so sweet! I found this line a little awkward though:
"From love I’m bursting at my seams"

How bout:
"For love is bursting at my seams"
"Love is bursting at my seams"

Other than that, this was an extreamly heartwarming peice of writing. I loved it a lot. definatly a 5/5. keep it up!
-Cheerfully Cynical

I really like this poem. It is really touching and kind of makes me jealous that someone can have someone like you to love them as much as you obviously do.
'I love you though you keep things back
And you lie for my own sake
It will all be ok tonight
But that truth I cannot make'
That is my favourite verse, especially the first line. Alot of people find it hard to love someone who holds things back, at least that's what I've come to know from past experiences.
Anyway, Lovely poem. Great rhythm.
Well done, Take care.
-Laura.

thank you alot, the girl is amazing and deserves every ounce of love i have to give. i love her sooo much

Wow logan, that poem is just amazing !!!! I just love your writing !!! she is lucky !!! keep up the amazing work, luv
E.

That poem was the best. It's so great I'm speechless.