Hmmm... you ask the reader not think of ink as "ink" and yet in each description it is the power of the quill (shall we say) that manifests or serves as the catalyst for the scene.

Regardless, the imagery of lovers ending, lovers beginning (I'd prefer to see it that way), and journeys of imagination or journal as provocative and beautifully rendered. A truly lovely poem.

I can't help but see this as anything more or less than a description of the power of the imagination and written word. Do let me know if I'm entirely off track.

You've managed to say so much in so few words, and I love your gorgeous imagery, for example "the depths of the sky / the eye of the sea" It's really lovely.

So, to conclude with that lame comment, keep up the good work.

-paperdoll

I really liked this poem. The message wasn't too obvious, but still easy to grasp. I liked the words you used, and the measure of each stance.

I love the way you construct your poems, it gets a nice flow...:)

This is a really great poem you are very creative to write something like this!

Using ink to make a journey, whether that be physical, mental or emotional is a great idea. Really enjoyed this one.

Divine, this seemed to have just slipped just off the silver tongue.

Thus my introduction I name you well for how I admire your talent~

~Silver Tongue ;)

Another great poem. Like I said before ur way with word make ur poems so great. I can't find anything negative at all about ur work so keep it up!