Comments : Winning the race

  • 19 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    hey kiri
    i wanted to know that was a great poem. And i'm really sorry you don't get to see your family. I didn't even know I had a sister till two years ago and now we're never apart. But i've never meet my other sister, my dad won't let me either. Don't loose hope and thanks so much for reading my poem! I'm always here if you want to talk!

    Love Always
    ~*~Natesbaby~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by rick

    Nicely done but like youve heard. it has spelling errors in it which makes it kinda hard to follow. other then that its great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    Nice job.. thats my email cool_gurlcy_15@hotmail.com .. u can write better but i liked it anywayz

  • 18 years ago

    by A Walking Disaster

    Thank you for the comment,
    This poem was very good.
    You are a really good writer.