If anybody can suggest a beter title, it will be much appreciated!
I am sorry its such a long poem. Suddenly i got into this freaky mood and wrote it down!

Hmmm...very interesting poem....nice work once again...i can't help u with the title...i think the title you have choosen is just about perfect...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

Great poem... Awsome work.. Keep it up. 5 stars for you. Please check out some of my poems.

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Great work. You have been out of circulation lately, lol.
Hope you are ok? Happy new year to you!!

I loved this poem Trincy, have you ever thought of being a book writer?, I certainly would buy the book. Fantastic imagery, this is one I will have to read more than once, thats for sure. Love, Tim

I was definetly not expecting the ending. Great job creating an atmosphere of a horrfic story with terrifying imageries then transferring to symbols of guilt and conciounce. Good job

Thanks for reading and commenting on this poem. I am happy that you guys liked it. :)
Love, Trincy.