Comments : Failure

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Toni, I'm so sorry you're feeling like this now, because I'm in exactly the same situation. It's funny because I've written a poem called 'The Script Of My Life.' that reminds me so much of this. I barely know you and you barely know me, but please don't give up. I'm not exactly the best person to tell you to keep your head high seen as I can't do it myself, but I really admire all your poems. You express yourself so well. I know it's nothing special, but poetry is something you can't fail in. It's impossible to fail at it. All you can get is different opinions, but just because someone doesn't like it, doesn't mean you've failed. For every perosn who doesn't like it, someone does.
    I know that this probably doesn't help you hun, but don't give in.
    Great poem.
    Take care of yourself.
    -Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    It does help, thanku so much hun xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    thats amazing hun. *hugs* omg. im so sorry for ya. i no wat u mean bout the looking in the mirror and wishing u cud see wat he says he sees, i do dat wen im down and it sux. hun im so sorry for ya but u gotta be strong and u will succeed. u'll be okay, ur amazing and u can get thru all this sh!t.
    take care,
    u no u can talk to me if u need it,
    ellie
    xoxoxoxoxoxooo

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku everyone xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    Amazing poem hun, Keep Strong and i am glad you are going to keep fighing, i love you! xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku hun xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku hun! xxxx