WOW...i mean lyke...what a deep meaning ur poem holds...this is certainly work of a skilfull artisan...keep it up!
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whoa whoa whoa....... this is like so effin good. cross off the good and put fabulous, excellent, and fantastic. this was so deep. and the image it created in my mind was undescribable. the ending marvelous. im so glad that you asked me to look at your poems. cuz it was an honor. keep it up seriously. fill up your page so that i can read more.