wow great jobi cant wait to read part three -krystal

Great job hun...can't wait for part three xxxxx <33 I hope you're alright xxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

great poem!!!!!check out some of mine sometime!bye

This is amazing. Totally keep it up...

hey good poem i think they are really good keep it up!

~lil slam~

excellent

Hey, I think that I watched a movie on that before, the grandpa was very old there was two boys and two girls and the mom was like evil she didn't feed her kids, she kept them in a attic...or something or other and then when she fed them there was poison in the food... yah

hey i know wat happens next caz i seen the movie the grandma feeds them piosen becaz the grandpa dont kow bout them and they escape sorry if i spoiled it 4 any1 check out my poems sometime thnx bye

Awwwww! c'mon. nice cliffhanger! I loved the first one, and the second one, too. I read them and thought in my mind... holly hell... what would i do? I have no idea, and dont know how you managed, but i loved this peice.. and i LOVE the way you write.

-keep on writting-
Courtney