Comments : Faded Girl

  • 19 years ago

    by Armed-Alcoholic

    Aww :(.. I'm sorry... Really an excellent poem. Well written. I'm sorry again :( Hope you're alright now.. Take care please.
    -nick

  • 19 years ago

    by Nil

    This poem is very moving. Excellent i say.

  • 19 years ago

    by inaudible confessions

    i hope you find your way and that the pieces of you are put back together properly. i also hope you find someone who will help you... no one should ever be alone.
    with much sincerity,
    brittany (nothing)

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    Beautiful way to exploit your time of pain and fear. I loved your symbols of growth being cut short, and the girl who used to be. I really admired the lines
    "I prayed to the angels and asked for their guiding light
    So I could make it through hell's brushed red and murdered fright"
    I really liked how your portrayed the symbols in those lines.
    Good job, lovely piece

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    Hun, I'm so worried about you. PLEASE hold tight Katie. I need you here. If you want to talk, you know where to find me.
    Love you
    Sam

  • 19 years ago

    by kArMiLa

    lovely poem, sad, u used all 5 senses and you are just amazing and pluz u r just too good. I adore you man.. good job...

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Excellent but so sad :'( I really hope things get better for you soon.
    Take care,
    ♥~♥~♥xRachelx♥~♥~♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Kiersten Nicole

    aww that was really good. You can email me if you want to talk... my lifes really shit right now too.. anyways, my emails plasticspud@yahoo.com
    -K