Aw great poem. I loved it! Really good rhymes and it wernt too long so I didnt get bored reading it :P
Keep writing - you got lots of talent!
Take care,
Rachelxx

Thanks also for commenting on my work, its means alot to me. :)

awww thts so cute and a little sad...i know what it's like when friends say all this but they don't understand how hard it is...i think i have a poem tht has a little to do with tht it's called life ends....andyway thnx soooo much for commenting on my poem, i rlly appreciate it.