This was a very stong piece of writing, i love ur use of words and emotion. It flowed nicely and had lots of rythm. grt job.. i really enjoy ur poems

Excellent write hun...thought it was great...you're so amazing at writing..i loved this <3 xxx i love you

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Wow....logan thats really great. Ots sp captovating and intense
xoxZoexox

Reminds me of a song I had listened to. Very well written.