YAAY im da first to comment=DLoLz..newayz i thought it was really great..i loved it..hummm....wat else to say but great job=)..keep it up

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hey a veryy nice poem this wud certainly deserve a 5

This is simply beautiful, haunting. It reminds me of the Lady of Shalott. Obviously its own tale, own creature, but it is reminiscent in nature of a Pre-Rafaelite painting in verse. Just beautiful.

BTW, my wife, a Pre-Rafaelite scholar thought the exact same thing when I read this to her.

beautiful!!

Beautifull, I get this lovely picture in my head...:)

What an enchanting poem. I'm speachless. The way you described her, "Her hair still chocolate rivers, her skin white as milk," it almost made me want to eat her. The way you wrote it gave a delicate feel, as if she was part of nature, maybe a tree, maybe part of the wind. Yet, she will be sad until she is released with the angels. It was with out a doubt a beautiful poem. I cannot find a fault. Thanks for sharing.

WoW that was a real good poem keep it up!!!!Loved it.

gr8 poem...it does have a lil nature to it <33

what a perfect picture you have created. This was a beatuiful poem, thanks so much for commenting on my poem.
-5

"I'm pretty fond of this poem, although I'm sure that fondness will slowly wear away and I'll find myself tearing it up."

If you do that I'll swim the Atlantic and slap you silly! GREAT poem. \5/

Very descriptive.... i'll have to read it a few more times before i fully comprehend it though....

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another wonderful poem keep it up. 5/5

thanks for reading my poems means alot to me
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nida