Again, another great poem that I can relate to...Keep it up hon.

i can relate.and i am sorry that you feel like this. i just hope that, if it is true, that there is something holding on to you.
your poems are well written, and flow beautifully,
polly
xxx

Once again, I think some of the rhymes were forced. Still good though.

very good, it's really good work keep it up! thanks for commenting on my poem i will also read and comment on another one of your poems!

~lil slam~

very sad and well written..alot of emotion in there..talented you are

This poem is great and I really love what you are saying in it. Just a few tips:
In the line where it says "it's full of strife" you need to add another single syllable word to keep the flow of the poem.
I think there is a a mistake where it says "no one trust me," should it be "no one TRUSTS me?"