very good this describes my feelings twords my love......the one that broke my heart

hey great poem full off feelings:D
good work ;-)

This poem was so cute! if only there were more guys like you in this world.. life would be so much more pleasent! lol keep up the good work and check out my poems if you want!

..xO Jessie

I love this poem no wonder you made it to the top poems, this is a beautiful lovely poem.

Such a sweet poem!! Excellent! She must have loved it!! And if you didn't show her, you most certainly should now.....