OMG RACH!! u wrote this in grade 8, and u think it might be a little dumb!?!?!?!? i think its one of ur best..but we thats just me haha

lol excellent >.< confused me there

I think it's cute. I have poems I wrote in 8th grade I just liked the way they sounded to me.

great poem. i love it. keep it up.