Great write. Take care..
-nick

Feelings. Good. The essence of writing.

Another great poem. Short but well written and flows very well. Still greak work!!! =) 5/5

Again you switch rhyme schemes alot. Maybe that is what you are going for, I don't know. But who amI to tell you how to write your poems, write them as you feel them. Enough of my ranting...Good poem.

very good

Dats some good writtin i like ur poems

Exellent job on this poem. U write very well!

I LOVE IT! i cant get enough of ur work! keep ur head up!
XOXOXO
paulette

that was very interesting. i liked the first part tho, the part that says pieces of my soul that fall like rain or something like that. over all, it was a pretty good poem. i liked it
SatuzKa

awwww i rly like this its very powerful xxxxxxx