You deserve better then that..This is an excellent poem, I can relate quite well.. Take care.
-nick

Hey hun..i thought this poem was about me at first....I still feel horrible...I feel as though I got you to trust me..j.ust a lil...then I just left....iI"m so sorry hun! Hold tight.
Love you
Take Care
Sam

Amazing. You have an amazing way of expressing yourself through poetry. I think that is why I like your poems so much. Most people discribe a concept, the act of being hurt. Your writes are more of an expression of self. (I hope that made sense). Take care, and keep up the good work

This was a thunderstorm UEx.
The anger was so palpable as to infuriate me!

But many would stop there...

There is an obvious sheen of tears to cape her anger. And this ill afforded pain while confronting her heart's bane is suffocating her. I think it's inevitable should "he" stay, it would give her the will to kill.

GREAT poem, yet again, good job