WOW PAULA THIS BY FAR MY FAVORITE PIECE OF YOURS ITS EXCELLENT AND SOOOO TRUE!!!!!!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!

aww! =[ that was so cute/ sad. I totally loved it. definatly a 5/5 on this one

It was easy to hear what you had to say well written

It was easy to hear what you had to say well written

It was easy to hear what you had to say well written

that was realy well written and had a good message in it. keep up the good work and if you get time can you check out mine xxxx

This was a great poem I love your style.

WoW That is really really sad, Excellent topic to write about, now only if people would listening to what your point is in this poem!! Anyways..Great job!
Shannon

that is a very good poem i like the point you were trying to make i think anyone could relate to this, good work 5/5 keep writing!!

really loved it......so sad that stuff like that happens all the time......people are cruel.....keep writing, I like your stuff....

Kalika