this poem did really touch my heart....for some reason,i couldn't say anything after reading this poem...awesome poem...the last stanza was excellent...take care and keep smiling..FIVE>>>

Oh my gosh, wow, this was just so amazing! I loved it. You wrote it so well and each stanza fit together so smoothly! Wonderful job!!! =)

duude, k-rete, you rock my literary world. your style is insane with the constantly intense vocab. the common themes, women, mistakes, sadness, lonliness, loss, they really build up. congrats on the tix, lemme know what happens. awesome poem!!!
Peace Out, Luke

Wow!! Just wow this is so amazingly beautiful, I luved it. I really like the last verse, its interesting...Truly Excellent Poem! Two thumbs up! And keep on writting!
Shannon:o)

GREAT Job!! I loved it!!!!!!!!keep it up! def. 5/5 god bless bye!