Comments : One day I will be free

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffany

    u are so good girl! keep up these poems! omg! did it really happen!?!?!! oh man now im freaking out!!! ... ttyl5 for you!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jubes

    Nah its not true. I really apreciate feedback though thanks so much! I just like to think of situations real people go through and try to put myself in their shoes. And then I just hope I do it alright! :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    wow, great poem. reminds me of a story i wrote awhile back. you're very talented and i really like work. : )

  • 19 years ago

    by brin macnamara

    WOW! what a poem! I hopr its not true. Nevertheless you express feelingd & hurt so very well. Again a great poem.