Oh that is a really sad poem, im very sorry for your loss. u have expressed your emotions so well here. 5/5 great work. and thanku for the comment,
take care,
xxEmmaxxx

In this poem, I felt the sadness and hurt you must've felt to write this. Truly powerful and strong and it shows the talent you have for writing poems. Awsome.

Hey
again, great job on this poem. i love your style of writing. its very desciptive which is great for the flow of the poem. anyways, hang in there. 5/5
hannah