Lovely write hun...I wish U was smart, then I'd understand it...but I'm not so nevermind =\...Anywho, great job...flowed well and the diction was amazing...As always, you're so amazing...Love you so much hun <333 xxxxx love you babe xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexxx

I wish I*************** i lvoe youuuu :(

Aww, this was a really good poem. Great job! =) <3

this was so amazing. i can not believe it. wow. yeah all my poem are about suicide. i guess thats all I have to look forward to. again great poem...alyssa

It sounds almoat vampiric. Loved it.