Amazing poem darlin. It really is. I'm sorry you feel like that, but that's really well written. I love it. Flawless.
Well done.
Take care of yourself.
Always here.
All my love,
Laura.

loved it!! n the ending contrasts and works marvellously

Fantastic poem! lol, it's really one of the most interesting and creative poems I've read yet! Awesome work. if u have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!

wow....
awesome poem
i can totally relate to that

keep on writing girl, you have some real talent!!

Really awesome, I know how you feel, I feel the same way, and you just put into words everything I could not.....Great job.....

Kalika

wow, thats so sad. great job. really. this poem is crazy, makes me think you can read my mind. amazing job. keep it up. 5/5