Before this poem, there was no smile on my face- but the beautiful structure, abstract, unique, made me smile. I loved every word you've written here; the constant scheme throughout...
Ok, I may be blabbering, but this poem truly deserves a maximum 5*! Just lovely!
My favourite stanza was:
This skin of mine,
When touched, may be found
soft and warm.
In the sun,
My skin glimmers
When kissed, by the
golden rays of light.
It truly gave a good start to this poem!! Very interesting read, never dull!