awesome poem! i love this part:
Just because my feelings I can hide,
Doesn't mean I'm on your side.
I don't show the truth to you,
Because then I'd know you knew.
That you do beat me down inside,
I've smiled and I've lied.

and the last few lines the most, very well written =) 5/5

very emotional poem...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

Amazing poem! You have talent. keep it up and take care
[xox]Sarah[xox]
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Hummm....very interesting...it was really good and i enjoyed reading it..keep it up and keep on smiling hun...=)..thx for ur comment...latez

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What Erica said about is my favorite part also. Can really relate to this one. Excellent job! >3jess