wow...i hope you continue to write because you surely have a talent

Great poem i loved the words used and the whole idea it was very captivating and interesting, just once again the syle although actually in this poem it made no difference, i gave it a 5*

"Just leave the door ajar
And I may slink in "
As i stated earlier, startling imagery for an amateur writer. Truley a Greek Poet!
~Hina

Intricatly expressive and unique, a truly good piece.

An interesting read, that creates a vivid picture.

Keep Writing
Nici

The poem was great. keep up the good work.

Emma