that waz really good..keep it up

very original, i like that!
kt

you are such an amazing writer. all mine are about death, and the same thing. I wish I could write liek you could. read some of mine if u wanna. You can IM me at lyssxo928
I'd love to hear from you....
alyssa

good poem im not sure i get the 25 cent thing though

Umm im not sure if you were saying it was awsome or not but thank you for the idea

Are you on some medication we all should be aware of? Ok i took alook at one of yours before and now I am truely perplexed. You had no flow and it was very choppy and I had no idea where the poem was going. OK maybe I need to drink more coffee before reading your work. You could have potential but I don't know where you want to go with it. Please help me find the poem that you excell at because I feel like I grasping at straws. Read set free. The message in it carries through the peice and you can understand from beginning to middle and end. Please let me know what you think.

Robert