Comments : Shallow graves

  • 19 years ago

    by Amilo

    Hmm.. it does sound like this poem is about cutting, but the meaning was pretty hard to surface at first, which is a good thing, of course...

    the rhyme scheme was rather random, but it carries an air of sorrow... I enjoyed reading this.. Well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebekah

    WoW that was a real good poem keep it up!!!!Loved it.

  • 19 years ago

    by John Holley

    wow. i started a post in discusion about peoples favorite poets on this site. somebody said u so i thought i'd check u out. and i can see why they like you. great one. check out "where were you". it's one of my favs. maybe i can be one of yo favorite poets.

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    You never cease to fail me.

    Paperdoll, you rock.

    This one left me lifted.

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Incognito

    You've done an excellent job with this poem, it is really good, keep writing you are amazing,
    - Incognito

  • 19 years ago

    by broken angel

    I really liked this. Good Job, my favorite part was the last line, it no kidding, sent chills up my spine. I liked it a lot, and I am definitely intrigued to read more of yours!
    You rock!

    Luv always, KT