this is really good!! actually great!! nice work keep writing..
anagha

Nice Tlyer keep em coming

Wow that was so good and true u are so talented!

i so totally hate goodbyes and you did good about explaining them ``-``

This is beautiful.... & yes goodbyes are sad... mostly sudden... & they are very painful indeed
you've brought that out
so 5/5
good going
love
amy

Another great poem. i really like your work. and your so young that you have plenty of time to develope your talent. never stop writing!
crystal

Great poem loved it well done

Ur r really giftd i love ur poetry great poem 5/5

This is a great poem and very ture hun. you've gotta talent.
keep um coming
gema 20 in cheshire xoxox

Another great poem, i will propbably end up reading all your poems considering you are really good at riddles! keep up the good work
5/5

Good byes are not for ever.. good jod

Great job i love ur poems great skill 5/5

Aww...It's so depressing lol. It made me think of my friends' dad who just recently passed away. =(

It was short, but it had a lot of meaning in it. I really enjoyed reading it. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I'm Never Going To Say Good-Bye To You Tyler...I Love You-Tori

*You're Mine For Life Babe*

Woww great job Tyler!!! i loved itt!! every line had equal importance, and you are a true poett... great writingg

Sometimes goodbyes,
Are the hardest things to say
Escpecially if you have to say them,
In a few certain ways.

^ i loved that, great way to start off the poem... 5/5 from me, and thank you for the commentss

This poem is so true! nice job!

Goodbyes are one of the hardest things that you have to do. I know from a lot of experiences how bad they hurt and how much they suck. I hope that everything went well. :)

Your Queen Forever <3

Yea well i hate life!!!! but your poem is true and its good <3