Amazing write hun..you're so amazing...wish i could help you :( xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

you are such a great writer. keep it up.
alyssa

You'd be surprised, I'm sure there are certain detailes as to why some people might not fully understand, but for the main object I understood it perfectly.

I really liked how you worded the piece with this irony of tragic consequences resulted from attempts to do something right.
I reallly admired how you portrayed the longing of painful memories to pass but are branded into your mind and will never let go.
I also really liked how you stated the need for letting go makes all the more harder to resist.
I especially admried the lines,
"My hand shakes as I light my cigarette
As I think of places I shouldn’t have gone
People I wish I had never met
And all the times I should have moved on"
I LOVED that stance.
well written, excellent job