really good poem. i love the part where u say " So for now I admit defeat
Because I can't defeat my wall". its beautiful. great work!
Fighter
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thank you!! ^-^ i apprieciate your comment very much!

Very good. Nice rhyming and flow, great rhythm and beat. I liked it a lot. I think I will add you to my fave list. Only if i'm on yours...lol. :)

your on mine ^_^

5! All of your poems are awesome and have a great flow! Great Job!
-Kristin