very very good

I love the way you handle the salient points about lying in the poem!

Great poem!! Excellent work Hun! How is your brother doing now?
Take care

Beautifully written poem Maybeth - your new work is fantastic sorry I haven't commented in ages but Im glad it was well worth the wait - really heartfelt emotional piece darling!

Really good poem Maybeth! I really liked it! (",)

~Krissy