Comments : How Could You?

  • 19 years ago

    by :( sydney ):

    great poem, i love it!
    much love,
    sydney

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    Lovely. A worthy piece of beautiful poetry expressing betrayl and abandonment from a friend.
    I really liked the lines,
    "How could you have done things things and live with no regret?
    How could you not remember what you said, how could you forget?"
    I can most definetly relate.
    I really like how you protrayed the pain through symbols like, "How could you stick this knife in my chest, then twist it where you wanted it to go?"
    i really liked the symbol of a knife into the chest, it holds so much emotion and meaning.
    Beautiful, well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Excellent poem, I have asked those questions many times, I feel for you... take care...