i like it

i really like this one. it gives me the sensation of when you're on the verge of beaking down. when secrets, worries or whatever, pile up untill the only way you can express them is when they come out of your eyes in form of tears. i have always loved the use of naming yourself 'her' or 'she' im not sure if that was your intention, but i think it was very effective. oh and also love the repetition of the first line...love it...love it!!
polly