This was good, yet very frightening, I hope that you would never do anything like this. Capitilize the I's because it detracts from teh poem when you don't. The poem was well written, however the message was quite scary.

i really hope this isnt true or never will be true but it is an awesome poem

this is a great poem...keep up the great work hun...~hun~

Good poem, I kinda like scary poems, so I liked yours alot, it had a good rhythm and followed well xxx

*flowed, lol what the hell am I thinking!?