nicely done, thanks for the comment :)
-A

i think this is an excellent poem, i also don't believe in heaven or any of that other nonsense (no ofence intended), its hard loosing someone close to you i know, but hang on in there ok
David

Great poem, it shows the effects of commiting suicide, and the way people feel, the thought of people just being gone is hard... and you captured it well in your poem.
xxx

p.s thanx for the comment, means alot to me

Brought tears to my eyes, I really liked your poem. It was very powerful. Please rate my poems also.

hey your amazing after everything youve been through your still standing its truly amazing I cant imagine how u felt and what u went through we both have been through sh*t just different situations but ive reacted the same was as u in the way that I took drugs And oh man so much more. I think theres a lot to you that id like to find out ahha dont think im a creeper or anything Im just really interested in talking to you for some reason im in love with your poetry for real. your my favorite poet not just in this site. And im sure you wanna keep your distance from me now since what happened I guess its really hard for u to trust. I respect that though. But please keep writing I cant get enough of your poetry. its so deep well sorry my comments are so long ill stop now. your friend, traj

AMAZING.....you are an increible writer! So sorry about your loss!

Wow, really good. So touching. Keep up the good work. Thanks for commenting on my poem.