I thought this was such a good poem! The rhyming was perfect! I loved how you did it. Great Job!
-Kristin

that was really good and sad!

Thank you all! ^_^

That is so sad. It's beautifully written in a short, but nicely worded way. Good job A definate 5.
Thanks for commenting on my poem. You should read some more of my recent ones. I think you might like them and i'd like your feedback.

It was said but seeemed stale too void of any life or hope. Well anyway it was intresting please look over my work if you get the time

.. Robert. please do not comment on my poems any more. your comments are a little on the rude side.

Wow as much as I think you hate me from the forum, Im still going to say I totally love this poem! It was really good but really sad. I give you a definate five. :)
Take care,
Rachelxx

oh how i'd love to say i hate you... but i do not remember you. but thatnx :)

Hey i would love to be friends with another great writer, i love the poems i have read of yours. lately i have been getting emails about me not knowing what i write about, but i write about experences and you get that, its so awsome. i'm new to writing because i've never been able to write before so thanks so much for the great comments.

This poem was very well written, with a lot of flow. The rhyme scheme was pretty cool. It was sad, but very heartfelt. Keep it up

so sad =( you have a great way with words though. very smart and talented 5/5 (btw i my self will never leave you ill never die as long as i got you ;p)