short but it gets the message across. what i like about life is the different ways people view it! cool idea comparing it to a battle, now that i think of it, it makes sence.

~PLP~ lil slam~

Very well written 5/5
Love always,
Elissa

I really liked this one it has a good message ur very talented and optimistic it seems never loose that

Yeh i like your view....it's inspiring.
I like that it wa said but really oot across what you had to. Another great poem...:)
take care..xoxo

Hey Tim,

Could not have put it better myself! AMAZING... truly amazing power inside that heart of yours! ;)

Keep the poems flowing... they are awesome! :)

Take care hun,

Tess

xoxo