hey i luved dis poem uve got heaps of talent definatly a 5!
hayz xx

Wow, that's a really well written poem. You had a good rhyming scheme going there, and it's also very relatable, because my mom is the same way. Nice work! If you have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!

wow! beautiful poem! u deserve 5 ! keep up ur good work :)