Wow, excellent poem! Your very good for just starting. Keep writing!

~Krissy

great poem! great way of expressing ur feelings.. keep it up..! (could u plz take a look at my poems thx..)

KEEP writing, lol .. gr8 job hun .. way to go .. 5/5 !! check out my poems too if u get the chance thanks again !

That was really great!! and its true too..u got a lot of talent so keep it up girl...and thx for ur comment=)

*XoX Sw33ti3*

wow! thank you guys sooo much! xoxo