Comments : To Be

  • 20 years ago

    by Thumbelina04

    Amazing! love the way to be the one is repeated makes it seem a stronger point of view, well done darl xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by bleed_me_slow

    good poem flows very nicely keep it up

  • 20 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    very good....but the ending doesn't flow with the rest of the poem....
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 20 years ago

    by ~ ! ~ SARAH : ) ~ ! ~

    Wow nice poem and thank you for the comment ... keep up the work ...

  • 20 years ago

    by W H O R E

    GREAT work bbez
    xx
    ~Broken Inside~

  • 20 years ago

    by {*LoR`~`LeE*}

    great poem!! i noticed that u rated mine so i decided to rate n comment urs...thats a really good one, i wish i could write good like that, but i havent writtin in a while GREAT JOB WOMAN!

  • 20 years ago

    by Anna

    its a well good poem huni. its really cool :) xxxxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Calley

    Love ya poem and i can guess hu it is bout!! LOL!

  • 20 years ago

    by Sophie

    hey, nice poem, where bouts in essex u from?

  • 20 years ago

    by -->>Vicky

    Short, simple, NICE!!.. i really like it
    by the way..thanx for commenting on my poem

  • 20 years ago

    by Sophie

    hey, sorry i ddnt get back to you sooner, Im from Harlow, dont no whether you know it thanks for the comment too xx

  • 20 years ago

    by micke

    very good 5/5

  • 20 years ago

    by Thumbelina04

    really like this! good work babes! xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Just be whatever fate set us to...

    Nice poem...girl...and thanks for your comments...5/5...