That's really sad. I wonder how you came up with that subject. It was well described. Good job.

... just recently a similare thing happend... though it was sad and scarey, i was too inspired to let the opportunity pass me up. thank you all for you comments!! ^_^

that man needs to die ... he must be very sick in the head to do that ... i would punch his lights out if i got my hands on him

that poem is really good kinda no very creepy but good

Sniff....sniff. That was so sad! But it was still really good.
Keep writing and take care,
Rachelxx

...well your poem wasnt okay..i wouldnt call it amazing tho...~sherrie~

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thank you all very much for your comments.. mean much to me

I really liked it, not what happened of course but i enjoyed how you wrote it, i got two new in mine if you wanna check them out

Awww! that was so sad! your very good at writing...almost as good as me...J/K Lol

your a really good poet....i love all your work!its wonderful and to all u people who thinks it sucks well fuk u!! lol :) plz check out some of mine sometime altho they arnt as good as urs but im trying.lol bye

thank you prescilla :p mean alot to me. i'll be sure to check out some of your poetry.

wow. that's really good. i liked it.

That's a very touchy and scary subject but to think that there are actually people out there that do that just makes you want to have justice prevail. Well written and said. Take care!
-Conner

i loved this poem and all the others i have read of yours i am 14 too i write a lot just haven't found the time to some of the rest of my poems on here and thanks for your compliment on Nothing as it Seems that was mine as you might have guessed

Sorry, that was me being speechless. An excellent write, and as Conner said, a touchy subject. An excellent poem. It's very sad, but so well written. Loved it. Kudos.

wooooooooooooo i like it. **takes notes**