wow, thats touching and very kinda of u to raise someone elses kid for them, you've done well keep it up i give u a 5 on this <3333

well done this is such a sweet and sad poem at the same time great job i think your friend would be proud of you thanks for the comment much appreciated x x x take care x x x

another favorite and im startin to put the pieces of the puzzle together now. I know uve had a rough life even though i dont know u i can see it through your poems But i 2 have had a really awkward life Im sorry for the s**t youve been through, i know how it is and this poetry helps even though i suck haha but u dont your really talented Im not really into other peoples poetry but now that ive read yours I am thanx.. and You keep on going and take care of your friends son for her. your friend, traj

Wow. First I've got to say you're an amazing writer.. Second, the poem was so touching. Keep up the good work..

Another excellent poem! Hope you don't mind me commenting on all of them. Incredible!! Really, it's amazing!