Excellent poem, ever... usually... in hiding that is... take care.

all of the time. I can relate to this poems sooo much. hang in there.
lots of love,
~Krystle~ XXXX

Beautiful!
First, I absolutly love your word choice in these lines,
"Eradicated souls cry out in monotone words of discontent
Screaming in such hatred with horrid voices that mourn to vent"
you'd be surprised how much chosen vocabulary effects a piece and this was chosen perfectly. it was powerful, driven, and intriguing.
Second, i love your symbolism. The whole main idea and how the end ties in is perfect, and the way you portray your symbols with these metaphors adds a more in depth and understanding atmosphere to the piece.
I loved the comparisons in this line,
"Chasing corners and broken stairways, afraid I was alone"
I just thought the chosen symbols were beatuifully and cleverly written.
All around, Excellent Job. Beautiful work, excellent

BEAUTIMUS, i lovvved it great job keep it up