I wrote this poem exactly 20 min before the new year starts!! God ! i was fighting with the time trying to write the last poem in the year!!

my favorite part is :
missing people praying for them
wishing they may be here
knowing that they're watching us from heaven
whispering i love you dear

it was dedicated for my sister and my loevly grampa that i mis soo much,coz a've always wished that they would be with mee in such times! I LOVE You Sis
I LOVE You Grampa !!

~Nice poem, this one too, Rua. Lovely use of rhyme in this one. Its good you managed to write in time. God bless you.
~take care, 5! always believe in love, amit ♥

Good poem, i liked it, i actually could sit down and read it. I don't do that often.

Very well done.

Five/Five

P.S. If you want to know about my poem "Fogotten Soldier" and the meaning behind it, you should check it again i posted all of the metaphores and so forth that are there on the page. Thanks for all your comments and votes

Hi Rua,

First of all, thank you for taking the time to comment on my poems, and of course, the kind words you sent my way were appreciated.

I too enjoy your poetry, they are free and full of honesty.

This one would be one of my favourites for sure.

Take care,

Jay

This is extremely good! You have a beautiful gift Rua! 5/5