Comments : Pain

  • 19 years ago

    by Raven

    It kept my attention...it was interesting.Great job

  • 19 years ago

    by slaMBit

    thank you for posting how you thought they were i wenjoy getting comments from my poems! my poems are all writen about me... i now have a problem and am going to see a councler... this poem is writin about the girl in my head... the girl who i dream about... the one who tells me to cut myself and hit my legs... shes cause me so much pain so i am writing about her alot... plz make sure to look at my other poems
    CYAZ
    slaMBit

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    wow this is really good thanks for the comment and the idea i will try and make it longer cyz

    *Amanda