Comments : In my dreams.. you're mine

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    beautiful and very well written, kat. good use of rhyme. try to be more organised when it comes to length of every line, keep them almost equal. (just a tip) it will look nice.

    take care, 5! always believe in love

    dont forget to vote for my poem knock knock! nidhi has come, if u didnt vote already. thnx.

    ♥ amit ♥