Thats a wicked poem! hehe I like that stuff too, it's very interesting! I have to catch up on commenting on all ur poems, lol I'll do that for sure when I get some time! Awesome poem! I know I really liked it!
Shannon

hey great poem hunz love it :D!!!!
i had a mail from u but i cant reply bak i dont know y wats ur email ill mail u put it in one off my poems on comments and ill mail u ok hunz if u dont want to u can mail me in christina_11_88@hotmail.com
ok hunz sorry abt that and did u write somethin it was a blank paper anyways try again plzzz i really want to get to know u better thanx hunz c yaa take care ill chek my mails tomrorow and my comments and see if ur mail is there thanxxx byeee take care love yaa :D
and again great poem :D

I could almost sing this, very eerie indeed! Very well written~Holly

ah this made me feel sick to my gut not that i dont like it but in a good way any poem that makes me feel one way or another is excellent like this one.

great. i wish i wrote like u do. i am actuall jelous cuz ur so good. 5/5 =0)

i think that its really cool that u r intresting in that kind of stuff....myself, i am intrested in why people do the things they do and why they act the way they act...very intresting stuff we've got here...anyway...i liked this poem..it was unlike anything i've ever read and very originall....great job!