wow... that was a wonderful poem. very unusual in the sense that it is so unexpected. i loved it. great work
~cort~

Awesome poem...I loved the imagery! Great flow as well! Overall, amazing~Holly

You never fail to amaze me ...excellent xx

How do you do it? Your awsome!

loved it very nice, loved how it pulled you in and you can't stopp reading

woah . .that was a really good poem . .i can picture everything you just wrote. really good work