brill poem . . . depth . . .darkness . . . amazing . . . wow im in awe . . . .*mouth drops to the floor* . . . talent is definantly not something you lack in . . . 5/5 . . . but of course x x x take care x x x

well wrote hun...loved it <33 xxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Awesome. I love it.

that was a kool so keep writting loved it so later.

Haunting and dark, i love it!!!!!! You r such a talented writer, keep it up!!!
Kisses, M

That was wonderful!!! Keep it up!

Oringal concept. Your poems exceed the normal bounds, genre bounds I should say, that most poets feel comftorable writing about. Good work here.

Thats so chilling and sad. I loved it.