Nicely put but dont look down on peace nice poem maybe u can read one of mine

Emtoionally this barely scratched the surface but it was a kind of nice view of facts

I agree with Kaylee and finalgravedigger - It was a fairly shallow poem, but had a good look at the truth in everyday war. However, you begin at the start by saying,

War is painful
But so is peace

And go on to explain the pains of war - without any further mention of peace. There is no pain in peace, and if there is, then it isn't peace. Apart from that, I liked your poem, the rhyming, again, intirgued me - your style is very individual.

Peace. [Sole]

Lacked depth somwhat, but that is ok as it makes the message very clear and helps it to stand out. the flow of the peice is very smooth and it is basicly very well written with a strong mesage within.

5/5